Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts

Sunday, February 6, 2011

Kindergarten Narrative - 22 1/2" Walleye (Guehna)













I went fishing.
I caught a 22 1/2" walleye.
It was almost time to go home.














"Brianna, it's almost time to go home!" said my dad.

















We packed up to go home.

Thursday, January 27, 2011

Kindergarten Narrative - My Book (Elker)

   


My Book


By  Gracie Edwards



















Today I went to school.
We learned about penguins.















Then we went to the lunch room and we ate nachos and I ate peas and milk and strawberries. 

(Miss Elkers kids are working on adding details to their writing and their illunstrations.  Gracie added lots of detail about what she ate and check out the detailed illustration of kids at the lunch table.)











I went to my sled and it was fun! 
So, I kept on sledding.

Kindergarten Narrative Cover Page - To The Basketball Game (Elker)





To the Basketball Game


By Levi


(Check out the word BASKETBALL and just imagine yourself as a kindergartener "listening for sounds" acrosss the word, left to right!  This is a BIG task and Levi did amazing work!)





(He's just getting going with the story, but I wanted to share the amazing work on the cover page. . . )

Wednesday, January 19, 2011

Kindergarten Narrative - My Sister's Birthday (Richter)












It was my sister's birthday.














We had cake and we opened presents.
















My sister got a mermaid and Dora.

Kindergarten Narrative - Birthday Trip (Richter)










We are going to a hotel for my birthday!
















It was a long ride.  While I was waiting, I watched a movie.  I watched Toy Story 3!














We finally got to the hotel.  The hotel had a Christmas tree.















We put our pajamas on.   We went to bed.
















The next day we went shopping.  I found  (not finished)

Kindergarten Narrative - Jewelry Box (Richter)

 
 





The cousins passed the presents out. 
I was excited!















I opened up my presents.  My favorite present was jewelry box.  It was pink and it had flowers.  It had earrings and it had bracelets and it had necklaces.















Then we opened up more presents.  I got a Zhu Zhu Pet. I felt happy.

Wednesday, January 12, 2011

1st Grade Narrative - Bouncy Ball (Kosytnick)








I made a bouncy ball at school.  We had fun.
I made a bouncy ball on Wednesday.
We were learning about liquids and solids and gases.









We had to go to Mrs. Kostynick's to put the salt in the water. 
Then we had break it open and I had purple.
















We got to go play with our bouncy ball.
It was squishy and slimey.

1st Grade Narrative - Locked Out of the Fish House (Kostynick)








Last week me, Chase, Mallory and Dad went fishing with Mr. Hendrickson and we go locked out at the fish house.
 






We had to take the door off the fish house because the lock was frozen.  I was tossing a lot of pretzels to Gage. And Mr. Hendrickson told me to go and break a hole in the ice and I did.















At the fish house we got a bite.  Then the bell went on and then my dad missed it.

1st Grade Narrative - Paul Bunyan Statue (Kostynick)








Last summer my family went on a trip.
 And I was excited to do all of the fun things. 
I kept saying to my mom, "Are we there yet?"









Then we got to a statue of Paul Bunyan.
I said, "Wow!" He was huge.
Then we stopped the car 'cause my mom and dad wante to take a picture.  I felt tiny.







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The sun was so bright that me and my sister wanted to wear sun glasses in the picture.

I smiled really big because I was happy.  I hope I can go to the statue of Paul Bunyan again.

Monday, January 10, 2011

Kindergarten Narrative - The Book I Read (Guehna)

 






Last night I read a book.  The title is Sleepy Dog. 

It is a fun book and it has pretty pictures.

And my dad gave me a kiss.
















My dad was so proud of me. 

He said I could read at school. 

I was so excited to go to the school.










I read my book!

The End

Friday, January 7, 2011

3rd Grade Narrative - Ice Fishing (Christopherson)

 
Out Fishing

Do you have a fish house?  I do!

One afternoon my dad and I went to the fish house.  We caught a fish right away!!!!!  Then my dad took a nap because he had to wake up early that morning.

Since he took a nap, I played my DS.  I played my DS until. . . RING ALING DING!!  It was a fish.  I had to hurry.  It was pulling fast.  "The fish," I cried to my dad!  But, too bad he couldn't see me catch the big fish.  "I caught it!" That's what I said when he woke up.  I hugged him and said it was the best day I will ever have with you even though you were asleep!!

3rd Grade Narrative - A Big Surprise (Christopherson)

Thursday, January 6, 2011

1st Grade Narrative - Christmas with My Cousins (Flatau)

 
BEGINNING - 





Me and my cousins and my brother and my mom and dad got to play together on Christmas at my house.  I haven't seen them in 6 months.








MIDDLE -





It was fun with my cousins.  I love my cousins because they play with ME!!  We were talking about playing with DS Lite. 





END (Not yet complete)

1st Grade Narrative - Sledding (Flatau)

  BEGINNING





Me and my cousin and Nana went sledding at my Nana's house on Saturday, because we wanted to sled together.










MIDDLE






Me and Wyatt took turns on the boogie board.  I hit a bump but didn't fall off.  Wyatt is really good on the boogie board.  I touched the snow when I went down.







END  (Not complete yet)

1st Grade Narrative - Dad Caught Air! (Flatau)

 BEGINNING  





Last weekend me and dad went up a big hill.  My dad went down on a little sled and I went down on the snowboard.
MIDDLE
(Mini-lesson focus was on adding details to the middle)





My dad's sled we down the hill very fast and Dad's sled caught air!  So, it went so, so, so fast and faster and faster so it caught speed!






ENDING (Not yet finished)

1st Grade Narrative - Snow Fort (Flatau)






Me and my brother are building a snow fort.  We were having fun!





















Then it fell! 

We were feeling sad and we weren't feeling like doing anymore.

(Check out the sad, sad faces. . . )




 






Then we went inside.

Kindergarten Narrative - Superman (Syverson)










We went to the basement to watch a show.















 Is was so fun!   We loved it!















Then it was done.

Kindergarten Narrative - Dartboard (Syverson)

 (I played with punctuation to assist the reader in enjoying this story just as it is intended to be read by it's young author.)









I woke up and opened the door.

And what  . . .









I saw!  


I saw presents!


Then I opened my . . .
















present. 

It was a dartboard!