Showing posts with label 1st grade. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 1st grade. Show all posts

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Mrs. Anderson's 1st Grade - 2nd Visit


Mrs. Anderson just starts to sing! 
She sings about the writing workshop, and her kids join in as they pack up their previous activities and migrate to the risers.  The lyrics to the song are on the SMART board.  I smile to myself, imagining the influence these powerful words might have on her children as they prepare themselves for the writing time. 

When they are gathered, Mrs. Anderson beams at them.  She has a new poetry book and she is SO excited to share it.  It is written by first graders, just like them, who’ve been working to become poets, too.    
Lately, Mrs. Anderson’s kids have been working on free verse poetry.  To get started, she reminds them, you need a BIG IDEA. . . something that matters to your heart.   She directs their attention to a brightly colored anchor chart with supporting ideas about poetry writing.
Back at the tables during work time one student tells Mrs. Anderson he wants to write about his cat.  When she pushes him to tell more about the cat, he gets very sad, and eventually tears fill his eyes.  His cat is dead now, and he misses the cat.   
Mrs. Anderson, working hard to honor the boy’s feelings and also keep the writing on track, comments on his emotions and tells him that some writers do their best work when they are feeling very sad.  But, you might want to take a walk and try to think of a happier topic, if this one just seems too hard to write about.  After taking a short walk and thinking it over he eventually decides that  he will write about the cat.
I am moved by his decision and by this poignant demonstration of how personal and profound the act of writing can be.  As  I watch this young boy face a strong emotion and look for the words to commit it to paper  I can’t help but reflect on all of the great authors I’ve read in my lifetime.  I realize that has been  their willingness to take risks and their ability to capture life’s emotions, both ups and downs, that makes their writing so enticing.   
Thanks, Mrs. Anderson, for making room for poetry, emotion, risk taking and choice in your writing workshop!   Thanks for encouraging your kids to find topics that “really matter to their hearts”.

Wednesday, January 12, 2011

1st Grade Narrative - Bouncy Ball (Kosytnick)








I made a bouncy ball at school.  We had fun.
I made a bouncy ball on Wednesday.
We were learning about liquids and solids and gases.









We had to go to Mrs. Kostynick's to put the salt in the water. 
Then we had break it open and I had purple.
















We got to go play with our bouncy ball.
It was squishy and slimey.

1st Grade Narrative - Locked Out of the Fish House (Kostynick)








Last week me, Chase, Mallory and Dad went fishing with Mr. Hendrickson and we go locked out at the fish house.
 






We had to take the door off the fish house because the lock was frozen.  I was tossing a lot of pretzels to Gage. And Mr. Hendrickson told me to go and break a hole in the ice and I did.















At the fish house we got a bite.  Then the bell went on and then my dad missed it.

1st Grade Narrative - Paul Bunyan Statue (Kostynick)








Last summer my family went on a trip.
 And I was excited to do all of the fun things. 
I kept saying to my mom, "Are we there yet?"









Then we got to a statue of Paul Bunyan.
I said, "Wow!" He was huge.
Then we stopped the car 'cause my mom and dad wante to take a picture.  I felt tiny.







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The sun was so bright that me and my sister wanted to wear sun glasses in the picture.

I smiled really big because I was happy.  I hope I can go to the statue of Paul Bunyan again.

Thursday, January 6, 2011

1st Grade Narrative - Christmas with My Cousins (Flatau)

 
BEGINNING - 





Me and my cousins and my brother and my mom and dad got to play together on Christmas at my house.  I haven't seen them in 6 months.








MIDDLE -





It was fun with my cousins.  I love my cousins because they play with ME!!  We were talking about playing with DS Lite. 





END (Not yet complete)

1st Grade Narrative - Sledding (Flatau)

  BEGINNING





Me and my cousin and Nana went sledding at my Nana's house on Saturday, because we wanted to sled together.










MIDDLE






Me and Wyatt took turns on the boogie board.  I hit a bump but didn't fall off.  Wyatt is really good on the boogie board.  I touched the snow when I went down.







END  (Not complete yet)

1st Grade Narrative - Dad Caught Air! (Flatau)

 BEGINNING  





Last weekend me and dad went up a big hill.  My dad went down on a little sled and I went down on the snowboard.
MIDDLE
(Mini-lesson focus was on adding details to the middle)





My dad's sled we down the hill very fast and Dad's sled caught air!  So, it went so, so, so fast and faster and faster so it caught speed!






ENDING (Not yet finished)

1st Grade Narrative - Snow Fort (Flatau)






Me and my brother are building a snow fort.  We were having fun!





















Then it fell! 

We were feeling sad and we weren't feeling like doing anymore.

(Check out the sad, sad faces. . . )




 






Then we went inside.