BEGINNING Last weekend me and dad went up a big hill. My dad went down on a little sled and I went down on the snowboard.
(Mini-lesson focus was on adding details to the middle)
My dad's sled we down the hill very fast and Dad's sled caught air! So, it went so, so, so fast and faster and faster so it caught speed!
ENDING (Not yet finished)
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